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Yet more fan fic from my slightly deranged KR2K world....

Post by knightimmortal » Sun Jan 19, 2003 6:50 pm

Yep, I struck again. Whenever I get sick, I write a lot.

So, I shall let you all in on my newest, slightly steamy fic. :)
Shadows In Silence

I do warn you, it is a bit dark, and there is a little bit of err, sex in it, so it is not meant for the younger readers. It is rated R.

Enjoy! And remember, I need feedback and love too.... :D

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Post by Soul Sista » Sun Jan 19, 2003 8:32 pm

:shock: Oh my,that was some story KI! When I read Shadows,this story just seemed to flow. It was like watching a good action-drama tv show.There was alot of good scenes in this story that I don't know where to begin! :) I swear Danni was going to commit suicide when she got her gun;but Kitt ended up stopping her.That virtual love scene between Kitt and Danni left me speechless.Jennifer acting like a complete jabroni at the party...priceless! The fight seen between Jessie and Foster was hilarious! :lol: :lol: I love the VR abilities that you gave Kitt;although I'm kinda of worried that he might become human,an android,or something else. I'm just used to having Kitt be in car form no matter what situations he comes in contact with. Overall,I thought this was another excellent story from you,KI.Good job! :wink: Bty,"Jennifer's gonna get it,Jennifer's gonna get it!" Bwaahaaaa!!! :twisted:
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Post by CK » Sun Jan 19, 2003 9:38 pm

Wooooohooooo!!!!! That was hot!!! But I'm wondering, what was Danni talking about another encounter or something with a humaniod car? Karr?? Or am I missing something here? That was incredible!
Sure wish I was in Danni's shoes :wink:

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Post by Scott Kirkessner » Sun Jan 19, 2003 11:51 pm

Slightly deranged or totally romantic?

A very good read indeed, it had the right blend of drama, action, and romance, look out Edwards :)

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Post by TT Snim » Mon Jan 20, 2003 12:09 am

:?:


That was.... how should I put this...? Diferent. Well, not Like my sort of diferent, mor like "I'm geting the soap and scrubbing your brain out" diferent.

I give it a B- For the plot and over all construction. Over all not bad.

It's funny, KI, but that's how I thought Kitt would look like as a VR human my self, I even have a plot sinario with VR running around in my head that has that look. OK, I skimmed over almost all of the VR stuff, not my cup of tea. But the rest was good.
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Post by Katt » Mon Jan 20, 2003 12:56 am

Um, I can't find the linkon your website. :(
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Post by knightimmortal » Mon Jan 20, 2003 12:59 am

The link is in the first part of this thread. Just click on the words Shadows in Silence in the first post of this thread, it will take you right there.

Oh, and thank you to all who have said their kind words. It's nice to see that after this many stories, people still read and enjoy my work. :) I am truly touched!

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Post by CK » Mon Jan 20, 2003 2:52 pm

You do have a knack for writing KI. By the way, do you ever plan to write any more stories with Karr in them? I don't think you ever wrote a fic about Karr's accidental reprogramming back to what he was before or did I miss it?

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Post by knightimmortal » Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:07 pm

My problem right now is that I am writing in two (soon to be three) different time universes. I will go back to writing KARR/KR fic (Shadow of the Knight Series) as soon as I finish this story arc (two more stories to go) in KR2K. and debuting soon, will be the Special Investigations Force, which is the series that is in the 10 year gap between 1990 and KR2K.

So, yeah, there will be two more stories without KARR. Then I will go back to writing KARR for a bit. (I'm a writing factory.)

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Post by CK » Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:24 pm

:D Yay!!! I miss those squabbly spats between those two :lol:

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Post by knightimmortal » Tue Jan 21, 2003 11:50 pm

I do too. :lol:

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