Brotherly love. My Kr fanfic.
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Brotherly love. My Kr fanfic.
I got this story and I like to read it and judge it for yourself.
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1653686
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1653686
Knight Industries Defence One
- knightimmortal
- FLAG Special Ops
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Interesting start, I am interested in seeing the next part, but I do, however have one recommendation: you might look to get a beta reader, somebody who can check you specifically for grammatical and spelling errors. The story has great potential, but some of the errors do take away from the flow.
And yes, Sith *nudge*.
KI
And yes, Sith *nudge*.
KI
Random shorty
Knight Industries Defence One
- CK
- Operative
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- Joined: Tue Mar 19, 2002 1:01 am
- What year did the original Knight Rider start: 0
- Location: Karr's garage--York,PA
Nice story there kido. Just read your newest one....strange that it's Kitt. Somehow I can see Karr getting drunk but not Kitt. Story needs a little background to it, like how did he get that way in the first place eg. case gone bad, emotional problems,...*has strange images of a funnel sticking out of the gas tank with a beer tap nearby* hmmm
Cheri
Cheri
Well I didn't think that far ahead, it was just something random me and my brothers thought up.CK wrote:Nice story there kido. Just read your newest one....strange that it's Kitt. Somehow I can see Karr getting drunk but not Kitt. Story needs a little background to it, like how did he get that way in the first place eg. case gone bad, emotional problems,...*has strange images of a funnel sticking out of the gas tank with a beer tap nearby* hmmm
Cheri
I guess they partied too hard for the holidays or something..
Knight Industries Defence One
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?stor ... &chapter=2
Part 2 up!
By the way, I took down my brotherly love fic for some editing.
Part 2 up!
By the way, I took down my brotherly love fic for some editing.
Knight Industries Defence One